I agree with NEPS. Not to pick your stuff apart, but since you asked...I think when you say that "by surpassing your expectations we strive only to meet our own" it reads as narcissistic. In terms of consumer perception, there may be a concern that they are paying for your self-aggrandizement. Keep it about the customer, and delivering them what they want and more, exceeding their expectations.
Otherwise, your site has come a heck of a long way in a short time. Nice work.